Update from Atlanta, 9-18-2010

[Kris@WLP]

[RBrim08]

[RBrim08]

[Les]

[Happygun]

I cringed at the general comic for three reasons:
First, for how disturbing the idea of Sarah and Gus forming an evil alliance is
Second, for how silly the dialogue was.
Third, for how ridiculously corny Gus' imagination is. Seriously. My respect for him as a villain just dropped 2.74 kiloJaffars*.

As for the adult's comic...

Jean's idea...not sure where she's going with this. Is she planning that Peter will remain loyal to Sarah, run away, her chasing him to the cabin and confronting him so Sarah can see him turn her down? Is it to get Sarah jealous, forcing her to profess her love for him? Stay tuned.

*1.000 kiloJaffar = 4.184 Fausts = 3.13x10^-21 Sephiroths = 6.02x10^23 Team Rockets

[tHEfOOL]

YESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[drizzt6667]

OW! Damn I wasn't expecting that last panel. In fact it surprised me so much I face-palmed so hard I think I cracked my skull...

Well now I can't wait for the next few pages. I've been waiting since page one for some Jean sexings and it's about time they finally happen!

[bar1scorpio]

The only thing missing would be Gus in an M. Bison getup.

OF COURSE!

[Aticston]

The Cramer comic I understand, him trying to get power

The Jean and Peter comic though I facepalmed so hard the shockwaves started a tsunami in africa

I mean, wow, that's just, porno movie bad writing

Come on, that's the ONLY way Sarah will get over it, if Peter fucks somebody else?

Did I lose the memo here where Sarah was -NOT- raised as a werewolf, and was raised as a human? And even as such, she doesn't have to accept werewolf culture because she is her own individual being?

Now excuse me, I have an appointment with the doctor to reassemble my fractured jaw

EDIT: REALLY? That's the best you could come up with to get them back togeather?

That for Peter to show he cares, he has to show he can still get it up, so to prove he can still get it up, fuck Jean?

Just, no, oh god no, that's some of the worst porno writing ever. Like, god dammit the next several pages better be Peter rejecting Jean, cause if he doesn't then I've written off the whole entire damn cast -OTHER- then Sarah as being selfish and self centered

Noooooooooo, why do you do this? You write up a great storyline, now you just, aborted it and served it back on a plate. Come on, I love mindless porn as much as the next person, but this is all you could come up with?

"I need to see if you can still get it up, so fuck me to prove it"

Noooooooooo.......love isn't about sex, for christ sakes that's the most shallow interpretation I've ever seen somebody call love. That's not love, that's lust. Sarah's upset cause she loves peter, she's more instinct driven as a wolf, why she goes fuck crazy (And I'll ignore that fact for the time being, as wolves don't mate non-stop so you can't say its instincts), but for Peter to show that he loves Sarah, he has to be able to fuck her, so he fucks Jean to prove he can still get it up?

Just, wow, this is some of the shallowest, most insensitive writing I have witnessed in a long, long time. Just, wow.

Peter was almost raped, Sarah misunderstands the situation and is heartbroken, so Peter is most undoubtedly in a fragile mental situation that he was just -HEAVILY- abused not only by Rebecca, but by Sarah as well for not understanding the situation, his sexuality has been completely abused, and the only way to fix it is to fuck Jean? Not to sit down and talk with Sarah? Or have somebody talk with Sarah?

Come on, this comic has to be better then that. If you needed to interject some porn into the comic because there hasn't been any in a long time, go back to Peter's parents, or Jeans parents, or a flashback with Peter and Jean that took place before, just.....

My brain hurts.........I'd expect writing like this out of JACK, not you guys

EDIT2: Seriously all that keeps going through my mind right now is pictures of Jean and the word "BITCH" under it

Her pushing that on Peter is the most insensitive, shallow, cold things I have witnessed in a long time, and you know what makes it 10x worse then what Rebecca did to Peter?

That Jean thinks she's -HELPING-

Good god, my brain really, really hurts right now

EDIT3: NO NO NO NO NO!!!!

My friend was raped, it was the most traumatizing thing in her god damn life, how do you think she would feel if the only way she could get back her boyfriend was to prove she could still fuck?

Just, god, seriously you guys, Jean is single handedly one of the coldest characters in graphic literature

This isn't even story writing at this point, or even drama writing, this is just flat out "We don't need to think of anything coherent" hentai writing

If you are dead set to interject some mandatory poon quota in the comic, think of something else. I gave you plenty of idea's

It could be a flashback

It could be other characters

But -FORCING- the guy who just got raped to have sex? Just.....

I dunno what to think anymore, if you carry this story forwards like this and Peter doesn't rightfully reject Jean, I've given up all hope with you two and this comic, I had a friend that was raped, and just, wow, this is just too damn cold

If you think this "fixes" somebody after they just got raped, then you two clearly have no idea what rape does to a person

[Happygun]

To be fair, this isn't the first time Peter has been raped...

...No no no, not by Sarah. By a certain elderly, half-senile werewolf - nearly as bad as Butch. And if you'll recall, Butch didn't finish the job (though it was still horrific). Finally, don't forget that werewolf culture and, arguably, biology, is more...prone towards sexuality.

Still, I'm stumped insofar as how Jean doing Peter will solve the present dilemma. Was a bit porno-esque.

It's just webcomic, so you really should relax.

[Steel Wings]

Cramer's plan... not so much.

But Jeans plan I am in full suport of.. Woooh!

[Weltall84]

Jean isn't stupid so whatever reason she has for doing this has to have some reason....right?

Well we can hope, right now my money's on her.

LOL'd at the Gus bit...yeah he needs a Bison costume...OF COURSE!!

And....

Peter, do as the lady says...f*ck her...epically.

Jean's due for some porn time and well, heck as much as I want Sarah and Pete back together I have a soft spot for Jean, and while unrealistic I've secretly hoped of menage a' trois going between the three eventually.

Ah a fanboy can hope.

[Blackjoker]

If I were to guess, Jean is basically seeing Peters reaction. Likely, Peter won't do it out of loyalty to Sarah (at least that would be my guess) the basic idea being that Jean might use this to argue to Sarah that Peter didn't 'cheat' on her or anything like that and in fact he functionally wouldn't.

Either that or she's trying to work out a way for a threesome.

[drizzt6667]

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