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Sarah say "Wurf?"

Is... is that a rolled-up newspaper behind Dr. Abe's back?

Will the rolled up paper to the nose REALLY work?

If it doesn't then , I hope the "good doctor" has inherited some of the good old fashioned "fox-like cunning"...

Seriously , taking on sarah in that state must be akin to trying to take down a M-1 Abrams tank with a rock...

Though i will admit she is undoubtably 1 billion times more atractive than the M-1...

And as far as the newspaper goes , well I do belive that is what Dr. Abe is holding , and either he has more guts than most armed battalions , or he's abso-posi-lutly friggin' insane , suicideal , or just plain stupid...

Vegas odds are , he isn't stupid...

she's more 'bouncy' than an abrams, at least....

and here's a glimpse of a work in progress.....



and don't forget to know about my

Things can go one of tw-...three ways at this point.

1) The good doctor smacks Sarah with the newspaper, calling her a "bad girl." Amazingly enough, it works. Sarah droops her head in shame and behaves herself - much to Peter's astonishment and consternation.

2) After dodging the initial attack, the good doctor combats Sarah with impressive martial prowess, using pressure points, needles, herbs, and other techniques to knock her out without causing her any harm.

3) "Oh no, Peter! Giant thrall Sarah is on the loose! You must distract her somehow...Gaaahhh! My pants!"

Of course, the "aminal control" squad will soon be arriving to complicate things...

In any case, I doubt Sarah and Peter are ever going to trust "Doctor Kitsune" again. And if he fails to contain thrall Sarah, well, he just lost any respect I may have had for him.

Well he needed to get a look at her somehow, as a doctor he needed to know what he was dealing with. I think so atleast, and as for bouncy.... well um... I can't think of anything appropriate to say about this situation in this place.

nice, that is all i can say

Sarah's gone fuzzy again, at the good Doctor's instigation. We are assuming that the newspaper behind his back is going to be used in the traditional way. Don't think so.
She's growling, but not attacking--yet. She's just reaching for the Doctor, not attacking. She's curious, not angry or defensive, even though Peter is having palpitations about it...
There's something different here, and I can't put my finger on it yet, but Kris has a surprize in store for us, I don't doubt.
Great writing; this time I can't even guess what's coming, and Bar-1's art is excellent.
I just hope the Aminal Control Goons are still at the Krispy Kreme shop, that's all; even though I don't expect they'll invade the Doctor's office but lurk outside instead.